One more nit - the email addresses for Joe Regan and Ulrich Drafz don't appear to be current.
On Fri, Aug 19, 2011 at 11:47 AM, Mary Barnes <[email protected]>wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-fat-pw-07 > Reviewer: Mary Barnes > Review Date: 19 2011 > IETF LC End Date: 20 May 2011 > IESG Telechat Date: 25 August 2011 > > Summary: Ready with nits > > The minor issues and nits in my Last Call review have been addressed. There > are a couple nits that were introduced with these changes. > > Nit: > ---- > - Section 1.2: "it will always be will preceded" -> "it will always be > preceded" > > - Section 8.5: There's a stray "In a" at the end of the first/only > paragraph. > >
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