I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3016bis-01.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2011/06/26
IESG Telechat date: 2011/06/30
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard but
has some editorial issues that need to be fixed.
Editorial
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* Section 1.1
The abbreviation VOP is used before definition. Please expand it before
first use.
* Section 3
s/configurating/configuration/
* Section 6.1
s/AudioMuxElement/audioMuxElement/
Thanks
Suresh
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