I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-15
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational
RFC but it has an issue that probably needs to be fixed before publication.
Minor
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* The draft uses addresses from the RFC1918 space in the examples
instead of using the addresses reserved for documentation in RFC 5735
(i.e. 192.0.2.0/24, 198.51.100.0/24, and 203.0.113.0/24). It would be
good if this can be fixed in the draft.
Thanks
Suresh
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