I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-iana-rfc3330bis-07.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-07-06 IETF LC End Date: 2009-07-22 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I have still (cf review of the 06 version) two concerns about the Abstract: - the first sentence "This document obsoletes RFC 3330." belongs to the document meta-data and should be removed before publication - the last sentence has an explicit reference to an RFC. It should be repeated in the introduction or perhaps moved to the introduction. Note the RFC Editor is in charge of the style of Abstract so these points should be discussed with him/her. Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
