I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ippm-more-twamp-01.txt
More Features for the Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol -
TWAMP
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 18-May-2009
IETF LC End Date: 19-May-2009
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Few typos:
lines 177-178
recommendations for new features in TWAMP. There are a growing
number TWAMP implementations at present, and wide-spread usage is
->
recommendations for new features in TWAMP. There is a growing
number of TWAMP implementations at present, and wide-spread usage is
line 358 - CONTROL,value -> CONTROL, value
line 368 - CONTROL,value -> CONTROL, value
line 416 - "IETF Consensus" -> "IETF Review". IANA comment:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/idtracker/draft-ietf-ippm-more-twamp/comment/95487/
Thanks
--Avshalom
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