Pete,
I'll expand the acronym and fix the spelling during AUTH48.
spt
McCann Peter-A001034 wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-04
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 10 April 2009
IETF LC End Date: 10 April 2009
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Section 4.2.8:
this field SHOULD NOT be used by conforming CAs
I assume CA is Certificate Authority that issued the AC issuer's PKC,
but this acronym isn't expanded in the terminology section.
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 7.1:
content type carried withing the ciphertext.
SHOULD BE:
content type carried within the ciphertext.
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