I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ipfix-exporting-type-02.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2009-03-23
IETF LC End Date: 2009-03-24
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- Please expand the term IPFIX, presumably starting from the title of the
document.
- In the Abstract, it would be nice to see a one-line introduction to
what IPFIX is all about.
- The RFC Editor has a rule of not publishing IANA URLs, so you may want
to remove the existing one in the first paragraph of Section 5.
- Section 7.2. The reference to RFC 5103 is never used, so it can be removed.
- Section 7.2. The reference to RFC 2119 should be normative (promoted to
Section 7.1).
- Figures in Appendix A. They all have a weird line spacing, at least in
my printed copy. There shouldn't be an empty line space in between two lines.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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