I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-12.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2007-11-14 IETF LC End Date: 2007-12-15 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: I have no approved tool to check the XML schema and examples, BTW is there such a thing? XML Doctors? My comments are only editorial comments, i.e., they should be handled by the RFC Editor: - Abstract page 2: described method described (only one described please :-) - 1 page 3: RFC-2119 -> RFC 2119 (in order to make search easier I'd like to limit the number of ways to cite an RFC) - 3 page 4: document[7]. -> document [7]. - 6 page 6: please expand the "UAC" abbrev. Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
