I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-eap-netsel-problem-08.txt
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: 19 October 2007
IETF LC End Date: 22 October 2007
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
Comments:
The nits are very minor - this draft is in very good shape.
Typo: 2nd paragraph of Section 2.3.2:
In Figure 2, Roaming Groups 1 and 3 both include ...
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Change "3" to "2" -------------------/
idnits 2.04.16 found a few very minor nits:
There's an extra space between "Standard" and "for" in
the first line of the [IEEE.802.11v] reference
== Outdated reference: A later version (-15) exists of
draft-tschofenig-eap-ikev2-13
== Outdated reference: A later version (-01) exists of
draft-ohba-802dot21-basic-schema-00
Thanks,
--David
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