I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-conboy-mime-opf-00.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 23 January 2007 IESG Telechat date: 25 January 2007 Summary: Ready with nits Comments: there is no real problem but small details to fix before publication (by the RFC editor and/or at AUTH48): - 1 page 3: I suggest: OEBPS Publication -> OEBPS [OEBPS] publication - 1 page 3: Forurm -> Forum - 3.1 (title) page 3: Downloadable Sounds -> something better! (and if you still handle the I-D by hand fix the ToC too) - 4 page 5: not needed because there is no reference to RFC XXXX (or perhaps you mean RFC 4288?) - 5 page 5: please add the country and use the ITU-T E.123 international form for phone numbers (i.e., +1 858 551-4950 for instance). - 6.1 page 5: OEBPS is not referenced (so my first comment...) Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] PS: I assume the IDPF executive director (Nick Bogaty) agrees to be the cited contact. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
