Thanks, will fix. The security section has already drawn comment, which
my last update addressed. Looks like I should try again.
Chisholm, Sharon [CAR:ZZ00:EXCH] wrote:
I was selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this
specification (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Document:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-taylor-types-example-03.txt
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that
should be fixed before publication.
Comments:
It would aid readability if the document put media type values in single
quotations. Instead of example media type, it should say 'example' media
type. Instead of text/example, say 'text/example', etc. This is done
somewhat in the abstract (in double quotes which is also fine), but not
carried throughout the document consistently. It is particularly a
problem for the 'example' type since it looks like an English word.
I also thought the security considerations could perhaps have been more
strongly worded, but that might be somewhat subjective.
Sharon Chisholm
Nortel
Ottawa, Ontario
Canada
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