I made three changes
Overview
Gunnerr to Gunner
Introduced some text about security threats
I would be happy to respin this: is that the right thing to do, or do we
pass this on through the WG for comment?
- jeff parker
myrmidon:~/MIB jeff$ diff mib.head.prev mib.head
120,121c120
< This document is provided to the IETF working group on IS-IS.
< It describes a management information base for the IS-IS
---
> This document describes a management information base for the IS-IS
myrmidon:~/MIB jeff$ diff mib.tail.prev mib.tail
31c31
< Chris Gunnerr, who should be held blameless for the errors
---
> Chris Gunner, who should be held blameless for the errors
83a84,87
> By raising or lowering metrics, traffic may be directed
> to insecure portions of the network.
> By disabling the protocol on an interface, the network
> may be partitioned.
On 11/12/05 9:31 PM, "[EMAIL PROTECTED]" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Background for those who may be unaware of GenART:
>
...
> I trust that MIB Doctor review has addressed the MIB proper, hence
> this review focuses on the rest of the text in the draft.
>
> Nits:
>
> - Section 2, Overview:
>
> This document is provided to the IETF working group on IS-IS. It
> describes a management information base for the IS-IS Routing
> protocol as described in ISO 10589 [ISO10589], when it is used to
> construct routing tables for IP networks, as described in RFC 1195
> [RFC1195].
>
> Remove first sentence (will no longer be appropriate when this is
> published as an RFC0, and rephrase second to "This document describes ...".
>
> - Section 6, Acknowledgements:
>
> Was an extra "r" added to Chris Gunner's name?
>
> - Section 7, Security Considerations
>
> This is ok in its current form, although it would be improved with
> references to specific MIB tables/objects, even as examples of how
> uncontrolled write access could cause problems. The references are
> not essential, as the threat of uncontrolled write access is both
> obvious and compelling as described.
>
> Thanks,
> --David
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