The 'description' words looked a bit misplaced when reading the full sentence.
Likewise "the libnuma" - I changed that to simply "libnuma". (Alternatives
would be
"the libnuma library" or "the numa library".)
Hence, I fixed my own wording :-)
Committed as attached. See also https://gcc.gnu.org/gcc-14/changes.html
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commit 50c5c9f94be7b26a2853f64909fa61ebf60086aa
Author: Tobias Burnus <tob...@codesourcery.com>
Date: Mon Sep 25 19:36:31 2023 +0200
gcc-14/changes.html (OpenMP): Tweak manual-update wording
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htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html | 10 +++++-----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html
index 2ca05ad0..c817dde4 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@ a work-in-progress.</p>
<li>
The <a href="https://gcc.gnu.org/onlinedocs/libgomp/";>GNU Offloading and
Multi Processing Runtime Library Manual</a> has been updated and extended,
- improving especially the ICV description, memory allocation, and the
- description of the environment variables and OpenMP routines. On Linux,
- the <a href="https://github.com/numactl/numactl";>libnuma</a> is now used
- for allocators requesting the nearest-partition trait as detailed in the
- manual.
+ improving especially the description of <abbr title="internal control
+ variables">ICVs</abbr>, memory allocation, environment variables and OpenMP
+ routines. On Linux, <a href="https://github.com/numactl/numactl";>libnuma</a>
+ is now used for allocators requesting the nearest-partition trait as
+ detailed in the manual.
</li>
</ul>
</li>
