On 02/05/17 08:44 -0600, Sandra Loosemore wrote:
On 05/02/2017 07:52 AM, Jonathan Wakely wrote:
This is the result of proofreading the release notes for GCC 7. Some
are obvious fixes for simple typos, but I've also tried to improve the
clarity of some text. Please take a look and let me know if you
disagree with any changes.
Overall this is an improvement. Just a couple suggestions:
@@ -863,22 +863,22 @@
<h3 id="arc">ARC</h3>
<ul>
<li>
- Add support for ARC HS and ARC EM processors.
+ Added support for ARC HS and ARC EM processors has been added.
</li>
Too many "added"s now.
Oops, I started changing them all to "Support for ... has been added"
then reverted it, but not completely.
<p>GCC's already extensive testsuite has gained some new
capabilities, to further improve the reliability of the compiler:</p>
<ul>
- <li>GCC now has has an internal unit testing API and a suite of tests
+ <li>GCC now has an internal unit testing API and a suite of tests
for programmatic self-testing of subsystems.</li>
s/unit testing API/unit-testing API/
Thanks, I'll make those changes.
