Looks good! IMO, however, the text would look better below the video/image 
thumbnails.

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On Friday, February 5, 2021 3:55 PM, Jim Hall <jh...@freedos.org> wrote:

> Do the social media icons on this test page look better? (This also centers 
> the screenshots and "learn more" buttons.)
>
> http://test.freedos.org/test.html
>
> On Fri, Feb 5, 2021 at 2:29 PM Jim Hall <jh...@freedos.org> wrote:
>
>> Thanks, this feedback is very helpful!
>>
>> I hadn't finished styling the page. The next iteration will provide a 
>> narrower reading area (like the current www.freedos.org) which should help 
>> the "text spans from edge to edge of the screen" issue. Also will add 
>> spacing around the top "menu" items, and centering the screenshots and 
>> "Learn more" or "More videos" buttons.
>>
>> By "I like the icons at the footer in the current site" I think you mean the 
>> colors in the icons are easier to distinguish than plain gray icons in the 
>> updated design. I was curious what folks would think about that. I can put 
>> colors on those again. :-)
>>
>> Your other feedback on the scenarios/questions is also helpful, thanks!
>>
>> Jim
>>
>> On Fri, Feb 5, 2021 at 1:20 AM Robert Spiteri <rspiter...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> First of all thanks for all your work on FreeDOS.
>>>
>>> Allow me to give you my opinion regarding aesthetics since I develop 
>>> websites myself:
>>>
>>> - Text spans from edge to edge of the screen - It is quite tiring to read 
>>> especially on a wide screen. Consider limiting the content to a maximum 
>>> width of 1100px centered.
>>> - I would put What's New as the first section - Myself I would be 
>>> interested in knowing about any updates as soon as I visit the site
>>> - The top menu items are too crammed - consider adding some spacing between 
>>> them
>>> - Welcome to FreeDOS section - Consider centering the youtube videos and 
>>> the More Videos button
>>>
>>> Other than that I like the colours etc. Here are my replies to your 
>>> questions:
>>>
>>>>> 1. What is your immediate impression? Does it look easier to find 
>>>>> information? Is it more welcoming?
>>> Yes it is more welcoming but honestly I like the icons at the footer in the 
>>> current site.
>>> [..]
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