wblock added inline comments. INLINE COMMENTS share/man/man9/timeout.9:98 Missing the word "if". share/man/man9/timeout.9:126 British->American: s/behaviour/behavior/ share/man/man9/timeout.9:140 Add comma after "zero". share/man/man9/timeout.9:295 Use "cannot". "can not" with a space means "not doing it is allowed". share/man/man9/timeout.9:308 s/timeouts./timeouts are needed./ share/man/man9/timeout.9:362 s/by/by the/ share/man/man9/timeout.9:364 s/CPU/the CPU/ share/man/man9/timeout.9:370 If this means "CPU selection cannot be changed while the callout subsystem is processing the callback for completion.", then s/can not/cannot/. share/man/man9/timeout.9:378 s/by the/by/ Either "given by the func argument will" or "given by func will". The second is less wordy,
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