https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=273983
Bug ID: 273983
Summary: Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter
Product: Documentation
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any
OS: Any
Status: New
Severity: Affects Many People
Priority: ---
Component: Books & Articles
Assignee: d...@freebsd.org
Reporter: bspiegel...@gmail.com
Created attachment 245074
--> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=245074&action=edit
Suggested patch
I've just finished reading the new Jails chapter in the handbook
(https://cgit.freebsd.org/doc/commit/?id=612b7cc1). It looks
terrific--carlavilla@ did a great job rewriting this chapter!
I spotted some minor issues: one TODO placeholder to add a missing xref and
various nitpicky grammar and style issues throughout (e.g. typos, comma
splices, serial comma, title case, etc.).
Attached is a patch with suggested fixes and copyedits. I corrected the usage
but tried to avoid any substantive changes. Happy to adjust if you have
feedback or questions.
Thanks for considering!
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