On Tue, 14 Jan 2014, Sergio Andrés Gómez del Real wrote:
I started studying the FreeBSD boot system and found that the documentation
is limited and, in some cases, not true; for example it doesn't address
appropriately the boot1 stage, stating erroneously that it is limited for
booting with a floppy.
Anyway, I've been working on an up-to-date version, and would like to hear
some feedback.
I attach the diff file for
doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml.
Thank you for working on this. From a doc perspective, it appears that
whitespace and content changes have been mixed, which makes the work
of translators more difficult.
The new XML source is largely unformatted, and should be wrapped at 70
columns. Please see
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.html#writing-style-tag-style
Rather than "FreeBSD", use the &os; entity.
I did not look at the content much, but am willing if the first two
problems can be fixed.
Thanks!
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