Thanks for pointing them out! These corrections should be live now. -Nick
On Wed, Sep 5, 2012 at 11:11 AM, Bruce Montague <bruce_monta...@symantec.com > wrote: > Hi, I'm posting a very minor errata note here about the "Apache Flex > (incubating)" page (apologies if this is the wrong list). Although minor, > it's very visible in the small intro paragraph. The last sentence in the > first paragraph should end with an "s": > > http://incubator.apache.org/flex/ > > That is: > > "Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® Player > in the browser, Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile or to native > Android(tm), IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows® or Mac® application." > > Perhaps adding a "the" or "platform" or "device" in the 2nd phrase and > using semicolons so as not to conflict with the last phrase that has commas > (and using US list convention) might help: > > --> "Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® > Player in the browser; Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile platforms; or > as native Android(tm), IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows®, or Mac® applications." > > > > Along the same lines (even more minor): > "This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested > the time or effort into the 4.x model." > > è "This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested > time or effort into the 4.x model." > > > > I normally wouldn't bother, but since the page is sort of the visible > acting project home page... > > > > -bruce > > > > >
