> Forgive me, but some of your phrasing has sent red flags to the > editor-in-chief part of my brain. Once you've added the additional > information mentioned in this thread, I'd like to offer my editorial skills > to tighten up this post. I'm not talking about changes to message (or to > your voice), just trying to tighten up some phrases to make them read > better. >
Sure thing Leif, feedback is very welcome on this. > Perhaps we could share a Google Doc? Can do, I'll share the link here later when I've done the edits and leave access open to the public. Would certainly be more convenient than going back and forth in this email thread - Peter
