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Learning to write – in English<http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/SuccessfulEnglish/~3/_kQsc3CBv1A/?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=email> Posted: 06 Sep 2010 02:56 PM PDT *Is there any difference between writing in your language and English? The answer is “no and yes.” If you can get your ideas from your mind into someone else’s mind clearly, quickly, and economically when you write in your language, that will help you when you write in English. However, there are some things that make writing in English different than writing in other languages.* What’s different about writing in English? William Zinsser, who used to teach writing at Yale University, answers this question as well as anyone. Let me summarize it for you. What is good English? Zinsser says that good English is… …plain and it’s strong. It has a huge vocabulary of words that have precise shades of meaning; there’s no subject, however technical or complex, that can’t be made clear to any reader in good English—if it’s used right. He says that writers need to begin by using short, simple nouns that express the basics of everyday life – house, home, child, chair, bread, milk, sea, sky, earth, field, grass, road. He strongly warns against trying to find “impressive” nouns. Zinsser says that short, plain, active verbs are the writer’s best tools. If you use active verbs, your writing will automatically be clear, warm, and energetic. For an example, read this famous sentence from Henry David Thoreau’s book *Walden:* I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front (face) only the essential facts of nature, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived. Notice the short, active verbs – went, wished, live, front (face), see, learn, teach, die, discover, lived. Now see what happens when Zinsser turns this active sentence into a passive sentence: A decision was made to go to the woods because of a desire for a deliberate existence and for exposure to only the essential facts of life, and for possible instruction in its educational elements, and because of a concern that at the time of my death the absence of a meaningful prior experience would be apprehended. The sentence slows down. It’s not nearly as clear. And, compared to the original, it’s boring. Rules for writing good English Zinsser says there are four rules – he calls them principles – for writing good English: *Be clear*. If your writing isn’t clear, you might as well not write because no one will understand. *Write simply*. Simple is good. Don’t try to impress. Be willing to write simple sentences with short words. Listen to the simplicity and clarity of Barack Obama’s writing in his book*Dreams from My Father: * At night, lying in bed, I would let the slogans drift away, to be replaced with a series of images, romantic images, of a past I had never known. They were of the civil rights movement, mostly, the grainy black-and-white footage that appears every February during Black History Month. . . . A pair of college students . . . placing their orders at a lunch counter teetering on the edge of riot. . . . A county jail bursting with children, their hands clasped together, singing freedom songs. *Be brief*. Short – words and sentences – are always better than long. Zinsser says that… …short sentences are better than long sentences. Short words are better than long words. Don’t say *currently *if you can say *now*. Don’t say *assistance *if you can say *help*. Don’t say *numerous *if you can say *many*…. Don’t call someone an *individual *[*five syllables!*]; that’s a person, or a man or a woman…. *Be human*. Be yourself. Don’t try to be someone you’re not. Again, don’t try to impress. Let your readers hear your voice, not someone else’s. An example – from William Zinsser William Zinsser is an excellent example of what he teaches. He begins his book *Mitchell and Ruff: an American Profile in Jazz* with five declarative sentences – or statements: Jazz came to China for the first time on the afternoon of June 2, 1981, when the American bassist and French-horn player Willie Ruff introduced himself and his partner, the pianist Dwike Mitchell, to several hundred students and professors who were crowded into a large room at the Shanghai Conservatory of Music. The students and the professors were all expectant, without quite knowing what to expect. They only knew that they were about to hear the first American jazz concert ever presented to the Chinese. Probably they were not surprised to find that the two musicians were black, though black Americans are a rarity in the People’s Republic. What they undoubtedly didn’t expect was that Ruff would talk to them in Chinese, and when he began they murmured with delight. Even though the first sentence is long – 52 words – it’s clear. Why? The entire sentence is controlled by one simple idea – “Jazz came to China…when…Willie Ruff introduced himself and…Dwike Mitchell, to several hundred students and professors….” And it’s followed by four brief, equally clear, equally simple sentences. When you begin to write Don’t forget – “simple is good. Short is better than long. Long…nouns are the enemy. Active verbs are your best friend. One thought per sentence.” You will need to use compound and complex sentences – sometimes – like Zinsser did in the example from *Mitchell and Ruff*. You will need to use passive voice – sometimes. But use them they way you use any other tool – properly and only when they’re needed. Warren Ediger Related reading: - *Learning to write – introduction<http://successfulenglish.com/2010/08/learning-to-write-part-1/> * - *Learning to write – almost anything<http://successfulenglish.com/2010/08/learning-to-write-almost-anything/> * References: William Zinsser. Writing English as a second language. Note: There is a print link embedded within this post, please visit this post to print it. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ESL Podcast". To post to this group, send email to: [email protected] or just reply this message For invite your friends, visit: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/members_invite Know how help us, visit this FAQ at: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/web/frequently-asked-questions
