I must say Elham you work hard on improving ur English. regards, Simone.
On Mon, Aug 17, 2009 at 3:58 PM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected]>wrote: > Dear all, > I will at least send an essay a day to the group, for 1 month in order to > improve my writing skills for IELTS academin module. > I will be grateful if you extend my vocabulary by your proposed > ideas and point my mistakes out. > > *Many people have changed from a mainly meat-based diet to a vegetarian > one in recent years. * > *What are the reasons for this and to what extent do you consider it a > sensible option?* > > In recent years, people have increasingly prefered to consume more > vegetables in their daily meals. Nearly, > meat-based diets have replaced to a great extent with vegetarian ones in > many areas of the world. there are > many reasons why people follow a vegetarian diet. > > Firstly, some people are againts killing animals. This is either due to > their religious obligations which prohibit > them from harming other living creatures or their personal philosophy so as > to preserve different animal species > and cease them to suffer. Secondly, according to scientific findings, > vegetables are much healthier than meat, > especially the red meat, in terms of the fibre and low fat they constitue > which prevents various bowel problems > and heart diseases. Moreover, gaining a balanced weight is evidently a > direct result of consuming more vegetables > compared to obesity and overweight problems caused by meat products. > Eventually, foods consisting of just vegetables > are less expensive thus they are more affordable as daily dishes. > > Despite, a totally vegetarian diet has some disadvantages. Vegetables lack > some vitamins and minerals which are > necessary for brain and body development and resistance to various > diseases. For instance, the calcium provided by > diary products plays an essential role in bone strength and growth. On the > other hand, people who only follow a pure > vegetarian diet has difficulties in parties and restaurants which usually > serve mixed dishes. > > Overall, I personally believe that human's body requires all substances > included in vegetables and different types of meat. > Therefore, it is not reasonable to absolutely omit any of them. Instead, > one should strike a balance between vegetables > and meat taking into account the consumption of more vegetables. > > > > -- > > "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a way > to get it." > > "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others hesitate." > > > > -- Simone --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ESL Podcast". To post to this group, send email to: [email protected] or just reply this message For invite your friends, visit: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/members_invite Know how help us, visit this FAQ at: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/web/frequently-asked-questions -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
