Hi Nam, I am styding for the IELST exam also, and thoght that your writting is perfect the use of 'nevertheless' and 'on the other hand' fit quite well, y will do fine at the exam.
just a briefing: Do you think abaout Google as only a seach engine? there is much more.. Rachel. 2008/11/20, NgoNam <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>: > > > Hi everyone, > > I'm a newcomer of this group. I find this group very excellent for any > people who want to improve their English skills, so I want to become a > member - an active member of this group with the hope that we could > help each other in the English acquiring and learning process. > > I should introduce a little about myself. > My name is Nam, from Vietnam. I have already graduated from foreign > trade university of Vietnam, however my English is not so good. I plan > to further my education by doing a master course in finance field in > Australia. All the requirements have been met except language - in > which it requires a minimum of 7.0 overall grade in IELTS exam with no > band under 6.5. It's a big challenge not only for me but also for many > other English learners, so I've been trying very hard to get there. > After a long time of studying and researching, I gained some useful > experience that I would like to share with you in the following > emails. > > Now, I want to start taking on my obligation as a group member by > giving a brief answer for the question this week. > > In my opinion, It's unlikely that we could live and work conveniently > without Google - the strongest search engine in the world nowadays for > several following reasons. > > First of all, in the information booming age these days, people can't > live without search engine. It's obviously that the role of reach tool > increases when the number of items rises and when this figure exceeds > a certain limit, the ability to find the right one among vast amount > of items is nearly impossible. Take the library for example, It's > certainly unneeded to have an engine to help you looking for books on > your bookcase. Nevertheless, the situation would be far different when > books are stored in a school or university library, and especially in > a national library, a search engine is really indispensable. This is > the reason why search tools have been developing in the internet age > nowadays. > > On the other hand, Google is the strongest search engine with an > extremely huge storage of information all over the world. After many > years of collecting, gathering and arranging information, Google now > has nearly everything which is released in the internet. As a > consequence, internet users can access any information they need > through Google search tool. For example, if you want to know about the > United State presidents like Washington or Lincoln, you just need to > go to the Google.com website and type their names, thousands of useful > likes will appear immediately for you to discover. > > In short, Google is the most powerful seek tool - which is extremely > necessary in the world of vast information today. Therefore I support > the idea that we can't live without Google. > > That's the end of my argument. > > I'm very glad to meet all of you and become a member of this group. > > Best regards, > NgoNam > > > On Sep 30, 8:50 am, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > > *Question of Week Number 35:* > > > > each day we are more dependent of search services in order to find what > we > > want more fast. > > Google become the most popular search service on internet, so we ask > you.. > > Could you live without google ? Why ? > > > > Ed. > > Group Administrator > > > > Note: "Question of Week" is a weekly question made for you improve your > > English without concern about mistakes. > > No matter if you write short or long message, what matter is that you > write > > and give your view point on the subject. > > Suggestion are welcome, send a email to [ > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ESL Podcast". To post to this group, send email to: [email protected] or just reply this message For invite your friends, visit: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/members_invite Know how help us, visit this FAQ at: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/web/frequently-asked-questions -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
