On 2017-02-17 14:00, Bastian Ilso wrote:
Hellooo engagement.
Release Video coming up and I need feedback.
https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentythree/ReleaseVideo [1]
inspirational questions for you:
- How can we spice up the narrative a bit?
- Can you help me reduce repeating wordings?
- Anything that seems redundant / can be boiled down?
Write suggestions as reply to this e-mail or on the wiki page. Thank
you!
Thank you for doing this! I made some of the changes that I would
ordinarily make as I was recording the voiceover (and to make it sound a
little punchier)... I think adding more information about some of the
new features like Recipes and photo editing tools would help (which I
haven't been following). I added some questions in the bullet points.
karen
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