Hi Jeff, Thanks again for working on this. I went through it again and spotted these that need corrections;
- Page 1; typo in first para, line 2 - “GNOME has driven developoment…” - Page 2; typo in line 1 "The GNOME Foundation is the charitable non-profit organizations…” Should be “organization” - Event timeline on pages 4 and 5; standardize all the word “hackfests” to “Hackfests” (capital H, currently some are with capital H some aren’t) - general comment here; some of the lines appear to be detached where they are supposed to touch the next object, whereas some overlap each other, and a few lines went too deep into the circles. - Page 7; Format of the dates under the respective titles aren’t consistent; please use “to” instead of “-“ e.g. Cambridge, UK — January 25 to 29, 2015. Need to amend for Web Engines, Docs, West Coast Summit and Open Help. - Page 7; Under Web Engines, first para, line 4 - typo "developers gathered to to discuss” … delete extra “to” - Page 7; Amend “San Francisco, USA” to “San Francisco, CA, USA” to be consistent with “Cincinnati, OH, USA” - Page 15; first sentence under header “Ensuring safety…” … delete the comma before the em dash. - Page 16; at the end of the description text… amend “easy to use” to “easy-to-use”. If anyone spots anything else, has any comments/feedbacks, please do relay them by Saturday as Jeff said :) best, adelia > On 6 Jul 2016, at 9:18 AM, Jeff F. T. <nekoh...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi all, > > The final draft of the annual report is ready! You can find GAR2015-web.pdf > in the engagement team's OwnCloud instance or at the usual "/public/" spot on > my website (if you don't know where that is, feel free to ask on IRC ;) I > also pushed the sources to the gnome-marketing git repository. > > The only thing that is not set in stone visually is the "financial report" > section. > > We have an approved budget to get a hundred copies printed (I will see > depending on the result from the printed proof), which I could then carry to > GUADEC, but we'll need to get to the printing press soon. > > Therefore please review carefully the report for last-minute defects and give > me your feedback by Saturday. > > Jean-François > _______________________________________________ > engagement-list mailing list > engagement-list@gnome.org > https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list
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