On 2014-01-25 13:32, Bastian Hougaard wrote:
Hello everyone,
I just finished retouching the screenshots for a brochure I have
created, aiming at advertising the GNOME Desktop. I plan to get it
printed before FOSDEM happening next week but before doing so, I just
wanted to hear any final feedback/suggestions from you.
http://rvzt.net/Temp/GNOMEv4.pdf [1]
Thank you very much in advance,
hey Bastian,
This is awesome! Two minor suggestions if it's not too late:
* Freedom to everybody --> Freedom for everybody
* in the privacy section, "We respect your privacy and puts you in
control of it", should be edited so that puts --> put
karen
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