On Aug 4, 2023, at 6:54 AM, Heikki Vatiainen <h...@radiatorsoftware.com> wrote:
> Two minor suggestions:
> 1. Capitalise 'inner' in the section header
> 2. End the 'Inner TLVs' definition with '... but no Outer TLVs are used'. 
> Here ' are used' is new text. That makes it symmetric with the previous 
> sentence and doesn't hint that Outer TLVs may sometime be encapsulated within 
> TLS records.

  Done.

> One thing I thought is the case where re-provisioning is a larger task which 
> begins with TEAP in-band re-provisioning and then continues with, for 
> example, HTTPS based device update in a special VLAN. That is, RADIUS 
> Access-Accept assigns a separate virtual LAN for doing the HTTPS part. In 
> this case the device needs to reconnect, or needs to be disconnected, once it 
> has finished its re-provisioning over HTTPS. The server must invalidate any 
> possible TLS resumption which would put the device back to the 
> (re)-provisioning VLAN.
> 
> However, I think this is outside of scope of this draft/RFC and is something 
> that the device/application and server software vendor must take care of. The 
> new text in the draft is enough now.

  Agreed.  Thanks.

  Alan DeKok.

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