On Feb 2, 2023, at 10:15 AM, Bob Halley via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> 
wrote:
> While I am not an EAP or TLS expert, I found the document to be very clearly
> written, in particular in its explanations of why various choices were made.  
> I
> did not see anything worrisome in the document.

  Thanks.

> The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements)
> with the document:
> 
> 2.2: "when the j'th inner methods" seems like it would be better with 
> "method".
> 4: "and then perform resumption using another EAP type, just as EAP-TTLS (Type
> 21)" should be "such as".

  Thanks.  Fixed.
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