Hi, I made editorial changes to the document based on the last call comments.
- As suggested by Michael Richardson, all the figures have been converted to SVG with aasvg so that they look nice in HTML. This required some small editorial changes to ASCII figures. - Following Michael’s HTML comment, I also changed the IANA table from a figure into a real table so that it also looks nice in HTML. - Made some editorial changes to the IANA section. There is now a suggested name for the new registry and the text refers to the Table. - The existence of the WiFi IMSI encryption mechanism does not seem to require any changes to the document. - Made a spell check and made some minor corrections. The new HTML rendering of the draft can be previewed here: https://htmlpreview.github.io/?https://github.com/emu-wg/eap-aka-pfs/blob/master/draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs-latest.html <https://htmlpreview.github.io/?https://github.com/emu-wg/eap-aka-pfs/blob/master/draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs-latest.html> Cheers, John On 2022-12-18, 15:47, "Michael Richardson" <m...@sandelman.ca> wrote: John Mattsson <john.matts...@ericsson.com <mailto:john.matts...@ericsson.com>> wrote: > Thanks for the suggestion, Michael. Currently we are unfortunately > using xml. The aasvg version seems nice. I make an issue on GitHub and > see what we can do. You can do it with XML, but it's a manual process. The RPC might be able ot do this for you at AUTh48.
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