Thanks Hannes. These all make sense and are now all addressed in github and I will include in draft-02
And yes, the intention is that DPP is recommended for Wi-Fi as it also addresses the Wi-Fi SSID discovery problem. TLK-POK is recommended for wired. I have clarified this in the introduction. -----Original Message----- From: Emu <emu-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Hannes Tschofenig Sent: Tuesday 13 December 2022 10:14 To: emu@ietf.org Subject: [Emu] draft-ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls Hi all, I have a simple question regarding draft-ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls-01 Do you see the scope of this specification limited to the use for wired network access? In Section 2.1 you describe the story as "use DPP if the device bootstraps against a Wi-Fi network, or TLS-POK if the device bootstraps against a wired network." If that's the goal, I think it would be useful to move this text from Section 2.1 into the introduction. I was also wondering whether it would be better to change the title of the document from "Bootstrapped TLS Authentication" to something like "Bootstrapped TLS Authentication with Proof of Knowledge (TLS-POK)". Minor remarks: There is a reference to RFC 9528, which is marked as a broken reference. Most likely a typo and you mean RFC 9258 instead. You say: "Device on-boarding protocols such as the Device Provisioning Profile [DPP], also referred to as Wi-Fi Easy Connect, address this use case but they have drawbacks." Then, you only mention one drawback. Maybe you want to mention other drawbacks. The terminology section should contain the RFC 2119 boilerplate text. Ciao Hannes IMPORTANT NOTICE: The contents of this email and any attachments are confidential and may also be privileged. If you are not the intended recipient, please notify the sender immediately and do not disclose the contents to any other person, use it for any purpose, or store or copy the information in any medium. Thank you. _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu
