Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for charter-ietf-emu-04-00: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-emu/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Substantive: First bullet point: "or other new concerns." makes this very open ended. Is this planned to be a standing working group? If not, can we put some constraints around "other new concerns"? The prohibition against obsoleting RFCs seems harsh. It's possible to require backwards compatibility without this restriction. I think it should be up to the working group to decide whether work can be better organized using updates or bis-drafts. The Feb 2019 milestone seems like two milestones. Editorial: -3rd paragraph: "And the understanding of security threats in today's Internet evolves as well,..." I suggest dropping "And" -- 2nd bullet: This is a bit hard to parse. I suggest: OLD: Update the EAP-AKA' specification (RFC 5448) to ensure that its capability to provide a cryptographic binding to network context stays in sync with what updates may come to the referenced 3GPP specifications through the use of EAP in 5G. NEW: Update the EAP-AKA' specification (RFC 5448) to ensure that its capability to provide a cryptographic binding to network context stays in sync with any 5G related updates to the referenced 3GPP specifications. Same bullet point: The second paragraph seems out of place; was it intended to be its own bullet point? 4th bullet point: The second sentence seems like a non-sequiter. I suggest a top-level bullet point for "Analyzing opportunities to improve privacy..." _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu
