Hi, IMHO this document is not ready to be advanced, at least not as Standards Track.
The document is extremely abstract: it defines the problem statement very well, but then keep its options open when describing the solution. The fact that the document has an empty IANA section is a strong hint that it is not really defining a protocol. This can be resolved either of two ways: - Change it to Informational, and add text to clarify that the document is *not* defining a protocol (despite the title of Sec. 5), but rather presents the problem and proposes several alternative solution strategies. - Or extend it to really define a protocol. In which case you need to answer some simple questions like: * Is this taking place at the EAP level? The SAP level? Is it a new EAP method? Should it be built into each and every new EAP method? * How does it apply to the few existing EAP methods that can accommodate it today? * How are the actual TLVs represented/encoded? BTW, just defining the TLV formats (and IANA numbers) for EAP methods would serve the community well: looking at the IANA registry for EAP-GPSK, there's a "protected payload" defined (http://www.iana.org/assignments/eap-gpsk-parameters/eap-gpsk-parameters.xhtml#eap-gpsk-parameters-2). But nobody ever bothered defining *any* specific payloads for channel bindings. Thanks, Yaron > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2009 12:12:30 -0800 > From: "Joseph Salowey (jsalowey)" <jsalo...@cisco.com> > Subject: [Emu] Working Group Last Call for > draft-ietf-emu-chbind-04.txt > To: <emu@ietf.org> > Message-ID: > <ac1cfd94f59a264488dc2bec3e890de5093aa...@xmb-sjc- > 225.amer.cisco.com> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" > > This is an announcement of working group last call for the Channel > Bindings draft: draft-ietf-emu-chbind-04. Please send comments to the > list by December 18, 2009. When proposing changes to the document it is > helpful to provide some sample text. Also if you have reviewed the > document and found no issues it is appropriate to send a message to the > list indicating your approval. > > The URL for the document is > http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-emu-chbind-04.txt > > Cheers, > > Joe > > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 2 > Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2009 13:11:26 -0800 (PST) > From: "Dan Harkins" <dhark...@lounge.org> > Subject: Re: [Emu] Issue #7: Password Authentication > To: "Joseph Salowey (jsalowey)" <jsalo...@cisco.com> > Cc: emu@ietf.org > Message-ID: > <356e783c475bc4bfd423f50e6b5a4302.squir...@www.trepanning.net> > Content-Type: text/plain;charset=iso-8859-1 > > > Hi Joe, > > I like your suggestion. Using "EAP server" would satisfy my concern. > > thanks, > > Dan. > > On Fri, December 4, 2009 11:56 am, Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote: > > OK good points. I can see the problem with the authentication server > > wording. I think EAP server is more correct in this case as it leaves > > deployment options open. Is the text OK if we change Authentication > > Server to EAP server in this paragraph? > > > > Joe > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: Alan DeKok [mailto:al...@deployingradius.com] > >> Sent: Friday, December 04, 2009 10:00 AM > >> To: Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) > >> Cc: Dan Harkins; emu@ietf.org > >> Subject: Re: [Emu] Issue #7: Password Authentication > >> > >> Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote: > >> > This section is about transporting clear text usernames and > >> passwords > >> > within the tunnel, so password transport requirement needs > >> to stay. > >> > I'm fine with more accurate text for describing the attacks. I > >> > propose the following text: > >> > > >> > "The tunnel method MUST support transporting clear text > >> username and > >> > password to the authentication server. It MUST NOT reveal > >> information > >> > about the username and password to parties in the > >> communication path > >> > between the peer and the EAP Server. The advantage any > >> attacker gains > >> > against the tunneled method when employing a username and > >> password for > >> > authentication MUST be through interaction and not computation. " > >> > >> The first sentence refers to "authentication server", while > >> the second uses "EAP server". I suggest using "EAP server" > >> for both, as it is used elsewhere in the document, too. > >> > >> Alan DeKok. > >> > > > > > > > ------------------------------ > > _______________________________________________ > Emu mailing list > Emu@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu > > > End of Emu Digest, Vol 47, Issue 7 > ********************************** > > Scanned by Check Point Total Security Gateway. _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu