Hello Daniel,
What you've written is definitely better than what was there before.
But there are some slight punctuation errors.
So just to give you a different option from a person that only speaks
English well,
I've listed below how I would write your version of the sentence.
It's just slightly different.
Thanks,
Mike
On 11/29/2016 1:10 PM, Luis Gil de Bernabé wrote:
Nice,
sounds better, but here an English spoken commiter might better check
this out :)
Regards.
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On 29 November 2016 at 17:37, Daniel <dan...@ezra-s.net
<mailto:dan...@ezra-s.net>> wrote:
Hello,
I'd like to submit a little patch for a sentence in:
httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
The original sentence I'm changing is:
"There are still request and responses and headers and all that"
and the proposed change is:
"There are still request,responses, headers and all those typical
elements from HTTP"
"There are still requests, responses, headers, and all the other typical
elements from HTTP."
The reasoning behind this starts while trying to translate the
sentence to Spanish, where it becomes too aparent as chatty, or
tasteless, and from my standpoint it may also sound too coloquial
in english too (although I'm no native speaker so that's up to you
guys to judge).
I'm attaching the diff file which includes the whole paragrah
because it has also been adapted for word wrapping.
If I'm being too picky or proposing this incorrectly, please do
not hesitate to let me know.
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*Daniel Ferradal*
IT Specialist
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