Hi Paul I am fine with that, thanks! Best regards Dirk On Mon, Aug 19, 2024, 5:06 PM Paul Hoffman <paul.hoff...@icann.org> wrote:
> Thanks for the review! Those nits are the kind of thing the RFC Editor > picks up, so unless we have to revise the document for the IESG, we'll let > them catch them during the editorial process. > > --Paul Hoffman > > On Aug 19, 2024, at 06:23, Dirk Von Hugo via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > > > Reviewer: Dirk Von Hugo > > Review result: Ready with Nits > > > > Dear all, > > I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for > draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis. > > These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet > Area > > Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments > just > > like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and > resolve > > them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. > For more > > details on the INT Directorate, see > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ > > > > Though not being a DNS expert I think that the document is very useful, > well > > written, and complete for the time being to help improve security and > > reliability of DNS practice. I have only few very minor suggestions for > IMO > > improved readability: > > > > P.1: > > current NS Resource Record Set => current Name Server (NS) Resource > Record Set > > > > P.3: > > for the IN class. => for the Internet class (IN class). /perhaps add > ref. (e.g. > > to RFC 1034) > > > > P.4: > > Therefore, it is important that resolvers be able to => Therefore, it is > > important that resolvers are able to > > > > P.8: > > and it gets a query => and it receives a query > > > > Thanks and best regards > > Dirk > > >
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