On 28/05/2024 22:12, Warren Kumari wrote:
Hi there, authors (and WG),


Thank you for this document, I found it clear, useful, and an easy read.


I do have a few comments/nits; addressing these now should help the IETF LC and IESG evaluation go more smoothly.

Please SHOUT loudly once you've had a chance to address these, and I'll start IETF LC.

LOUDLY!

Questions / issues / comments:
1: Can you please update the Abstract to clarify *how* the document updates RFC1035?

I think that something like:
"This document updates RFC1035 by {clarifying|specifying} that the QDCOUNT parameter of a DNS Query must not be greater than one." or similar should work.

I've committed an update, albeit it it doesn't take the above verbatim because it would've ended up -mostly- repeating the text that was already there and in the title.

The abstract now reads:

This document updates RFC 1035 by constraining the allowed value of the
QDCOUNT parameter in DNS messages with OPCODE = 0 (QUERY) to a maximum
of one, and specifies the required behaviour when values that are not
allowed are encountered.

If that suffices I'll actually upload that to the datatracker.

I also took the opportunity to incorporate a trivial editorial nit spotted by Tony Finch that was reported to us over the weekend.

cheers,

Ray

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