On Mon, 8 Jan 2024 20:54:52 -0500 Tim Wicinski wrote: > Current versions of the draft is available here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis/ > > The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practice > > Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
Three minor issues I notice in the current draft (01): 1. Sec. 2.: Although this document is targeted at the global DNS, it also could apply to a private DNS as well. I suggest dropping "also" (given the "as well", it adds nothing semantically, and makes the sentence grammatically somewhat awkward/distracting). 2. s/pulished/published/g (4 occurrences, sec. 3.3., 4.2.) 3. There are 7 occurrences of "name server" and a single "nameserver" (in sec. 5.). I suggest changing the latter to "name server" to unify the usage. -- Štěpán _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
