> On Sep 5, 2023, at 3:52 AM, Robert Wilton via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>
> wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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>
> Hi,
>
> Thanks for working on this document - I'm not a DNS expert but it looks like
> good advice.
>
> A couple of minor comments for your consideration:
>
> (1) p 2, sec 1. Introduction
>
> This document updates [RFC2308] to require negative caching of DNS
> resolution failures and provides additional examples of resolution
> failures.
>
> Perhaps "caching of all DNS resolution failures"?
Agreed.
>
>
> (2) p 2, sec 1.1. Motivation
>
> RFC Editor: We'd like your thoughts on moving the Motivation and
> Related Work sections to appendices. Is that a preferred style?
>
> Not the RFC editor, but I would keep the motivation here, as a subsection of
> the introduction.
Excellent, thanks for the feedback.
DW
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