Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures-07: No Objection

When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
introductory paragraph, however.)


Please refer to 
https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ 
for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.


The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures/



----------------------------------------------------------------------
COMMENT:
----------------------------------------------------------------------

Thanks for working on this specification. My review does yield any TSV related
issues.

I have following minor comments that I believe will improve the document
quality when addressed -

  # While this specification updates RFC2308, RFC4038 and RFC4697, the
  Introduction section only mentions RFC2308. Would be good to give emphasis on
  all the updates.

  # Regarding Motivation section, I like the motivation section up front and
  understanding of the problem to solve before going into solution description.
  So I would like to keep this section where it is.

  # Section 2 says -

        If any one of the available servers provides a useful response, then it
        is not considered a resolution failure.

    with that I am not sure why responses in section 2.1 and 2.2 are qualified
    as useful responses. Please add some clarification texts in those sections.



_______________________________________________
DNSOP mailing list
DNSOP@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop

Reply via email to