Thanks for the early review! We will fix these things in the -01 On Aug 29, 2023, at 1:17 AM, Di Ma via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote:
> 1)In Section 2.1, there is a typo in “The priming information in software may > be in any format that gives he software the addresses associated with at least > some of the root server identifiers.” > > “he” right before “software ” should have been “the”. Yep. > 2)In Section 3.1, as in “Because the NS records for the root are not special”, > there would be better “root zone” here instead of just “root”. Agree. > 3)In Section 4.2, as in “There are currently 13 root servers. All have one > IPv4 > address and one IPv6 address. ” > > I suggest “Each has one single IPv4 address and one single IPv6 address. ” Yes, better. > 4)On the whole, this document uses “root name server” somewhere and “root > server” somewhere else. I suggest using only one of them to keep terminology > consistence. Agree. We'll do a -01 when there are more reviews. --Paul Hoffman _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
