> On Aug 27, 2023, at 3:47 PM, Erik Kline via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> 
> wrote:
> 
> ## Nits
> 
> ### S1.2
> 
> * "only exacerbated" -> "further exacerbated"?
> 
>  Use of "only" here might be misread.
> 
> ### S2.2
> 
> * s/2001:DB8:1::/2001:db8:1::/g
> 
>  in accordance with RFC 5952 section 4.3
> 


Thanks Erik, I’ve made these changes to the document.

DW


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