John Scudder via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> writes: > John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec3-guidance-08: No Objection
Thanks John; I've made all of these changes: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks for this document, I found it easy to read and useful. I have only a > few > nits: > > 1. In the Introduction: “This sacrifices the tamper-resistance proof of non- > existence offered by NSEC3” > > That doesn’t parse. Probably what you mean is “This sacrifices the > tamper-resistance of the proof of non-existence offered by NSEC3” (added “of > the”)? Or "... the tamper-resistant proof" would also work. > > 2. In Sections 2.4 and 3.1, I suggest “re-signing” (signing again) instead of > “resigning” (quitting). > > 3. Appendix B has “The table (Appendix C) > below” > > The “(Appendix C)” part appears to be a mistake? The table is uncaptioned, I > guess you either should caption it and xref that caption, or just remove the > xref? > > > -- Wes Hardaker USC/ISI _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
