Wes, Viktor,

On Sun, 2022-03-06 at 20:36 -0800, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote:
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec3-guidance-05.txt

Thank you for your continued work on this.

This appears to be in excellent shape - you'd have my support in a
WGLC. I love that we managed to get to "iterations count to 0 MUST" in
this important document!

A few nits:

> Because hashing provides only moderate protection, as shown recently
in academic studies of NSEC3 protected zones [GPUNSEC3][ZONEENUM].

This sentence appears to be lacking a second half.

> Operators are encouraged to forget the salt entirely

"forgo" perhaps? Or, easier on the eyes, "not use the salt at all"?

> Note that this specification significantly decreases the requirements
originally specified in Section 10.3 of [RFC5155].  

Should this document say "Updates: RFC5155" ?

> man-it-the-middle attacks

man-in-the-middle

> Thus, validating resolver operators and software implementers SHOULD
set the point above which a zone is treated for certain values of NSEC3
iterations counts to the same as the point where a validating resolver
begins returning SERVFAIL.

Is "as insecure" missing after "treated"?

Kind regards,
-- 
Peter van Dijk
PowerDNS.COM BV - https://www.powerdns.com/

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