Thank you Murray for your review, Op 16-12-2020 om 07:31 schreef Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > In Section 3 there's a line that says "Client-Cookie = 64 bits of entropy" > which is both (a) not a sentence, and (b) the same as something said in the > first paragraph of this section. I think it can be removed.
It is an ascii-art showing how the value of the Client Cookie is determined, similar to how there is an ascii-art for the Hash value in the Server Cookie in section 4.4. > Also in Section 7, you're creating a registry with Expert Review, but there's > no particular guidance offered to the Designated Expert once one is assigned, > as suggested by RFC 8126. Are we all OK with that? You might advise, for > example, that the registration of a new Method really should have a > specification someplace. The revised document (posted soon) does have more text on the requirements for the pseudorandom function (though not in Section 7 itself). Also, we don't really expect a new algorithm anytime soon. Your other comments have been addressed in the revised document. Cheers, -- Willem > > > > _______________________________________________ > DNSOP mailing list > DNSOP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop > _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
