Hi Elwyn, Thanks for the review!
> On Sep 12, 2020, at 3:09 PM, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://secure-web.cisco.com/12LVckLb71S7ZMNTRJqAK9TXQOnEn6EpgJrqVNo0d-rTnBYvY_GDLeWZIyzUW7PV0GF3S1DDaBZYQC5cuxOVbWotTsYchDI8VAX-_TNxjTc1r6HMIY6mSoy1o5i_-eSjtwpdRfiX6eEYRXMnLwAPlldn8X5ihWiWnPPXnoBAUaSSOmd28YSEBnTXnNpgJTZRWOwEIEci7XcSbfvVLsd9p43bevq2lc222cnOadwUrG0ln1g7-U0Oh2UzIoxvnwWGi6QQSb0KoCG5cc3rPJyjfyg/https%3A%2F%2Ftrac.ietf.org%2Ftrac%2Fgen%2Fwiki%2FGenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2020-09-12 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-14 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready with few nits. > > Major issues: > None (Your original email was truncated around here but I "repaired" it with what I found at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09-genart-lc-davies-2020-09-12/) > > Minor Issues: > s2.3: The example of the presenation format shown in s2.4 has the sequence > of hex digits representing the Digest surrounded in parentheses. This is not > specified in s2.3. Which is right? The use of parentheses for continuation of long lines is a long-standing feature of DNS record presentation described in RFC 1035 (sec 5.1). > > Nits and Editorial: > > s1, para 2: s/verification the zone as a whole/verification of the zone as a > whole/ Fixed. > > s1.1, last para: s/aka AXFR SIG/identified as the AXFR SIG/ Fixed. > > s3.1, para 4: I think this should be RECOMMENDED. Yes, this was also identified in the SECDIR review and I've made the change. > > s9: I have a suspiscion that you mean David Black rather than David Blacka. David Blacka is a colleague of mine at Verisign and coauthor of several RFCs: https://www.rfc-editor.org/search/rfc_search_detail.php?pubstatus%5B%5D=Any&pub_date_type=any&author=Blacka DW
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