Erik, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa
> On Sep 26, 2018, at 3:57 PM, Erik Kline <ek=40google....@dmarc.ietf.org> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Erik Kline > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13 > Reviewer: Erik Kline > Review Date: 2018-09-26 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-25 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Major issues: none > > Minor issues: none > > Nits/editorial comments: just a few things that look like they may be typos > > Section 2: "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me. "DNS node names" > perhaps? > > Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/? > > Section 5: s/in the of/in the/? > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > gen-...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
