Thanks for the review > From: Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nos...@gmail.com> > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review result: Has Nits > > I think would be ready if it passed IDnits. I found the document good > read and found no sinkholes in it. Pointing up two implementations was > also great. > > The Proto Write-up seems not be up to date with what IDnits says e.g., > when it comes to downrefs, which is what the IDnits complain about. > > A couple of editorials: > > Lines 118-119 says: "This takes this.." I would reword to something > like: > "This document takes using NXDOMAIN information for more effective > caching further." > > Lines 396 and 397 uses "is NOT" and "IS making". I would use lower > case here. No reason to use capitalized and still non-RFC2119 > language.
I will update the parts. > Line 407 is would be great to indicate since which version of Unbound > support has been in place. It is my edit mistake. Unbound does not implement "Aggressive use of DNSSEC-validated Cache" now. See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/Iv1mxko-ZtUBkNWPZnnnwT9LR-A # I implemented NSEC only version using Unbound three years ago as a patch. -- Kazunori Fujiwara, JPRS <fujiw...@jprs.co.jp> _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
