On Sun, Oct 30, 2016 at 11:49 PM, Matthew Pounsett <m...@conundrum.com>
wrote:

> Hi all.
>
> I've submitted an update for the below draft which I'd like the working
> group to eventually consider for adoption.  If there's time in the agenda,
> I'd like to ask the chairs for some time to discuss this in Seoul.
>
> As with the previous version, I'm looking for some specific feedback on a
> few things.
>
> 1) I believe this draft represents operational experience that could be
> added to RFC6781.  While it doesn't (intentionally) change anything in
> 6781, I think the additional operator change procedure justifies the
> "updates" meta-data in the draft.  With the increase in gTLDs and the
> expected future increase in gTLD transfers I think it's important to put
> this information in front of operators searching for advice, which makes
> having it appear as a link from the 6781 meta-data important.  I'd like to
> get the group's feeling on that.
>
> 2) RFC 6781 does not explicitly describe the timings of each step in the
> operator change procedure, leaving that as an exercise for the reader to
> obtain by reading earlier sections of the RFC.  The -01 version of this
> draft followed that style for a couple of reasons: first, so as not to
> unnecessarily duplicate any information; second, to avoid unintentionally
> introducing any ambiguity or update to the information in 6781.  I've been
> of two minds on that, however.  I felt that the aim of this draft–to
> provide advice to inexperienced operators–was not well served by leaving a
> prose description of the procedure out.  With the recent publication of
> errata for § 4.1.2, my opinion has tipped slightly the other way, and so
> I've added text to describe the steps and their timings.
>
> 3) I don't believe this draft raises any *new* security considerations, so
> I've done my best to incorporate by reference the security considerations
> from 6781.  I'd like to know your thoughts on this as well.
>
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: <internet-dra...@ietf.org>
> Date: 30 October 2016 at 23:29
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-pounsett-transferring-
> automated-dnssec-zones-02.txt
> To: Matthew Pounsett <m...@conundrum.com>
>
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-pounsett-transferring-au
> tomated-dnssec-zones-02.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Matthew Pounsett and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:           draft-pounsett-transferring-automated-dnssec-zones
> Revision:       02
> Title:          Change of Operator Procedures for Automatically Published
> DNSSEC Zones
> Document date:  2016-10-31
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          7
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-
> drafts/draft-pounsett-transferring-automated-dnssec-zones-02.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/
> doc/draft-pounsett-transferring-automated-dnssec-zones/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/d
> raft-pounsett-transferring-automated-dnssec-zones-02
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?
> url2=draft-pounsett-transferring-automated-dnssec-zones-02
>
> Abstract:
>    Section 4.3.5.1 of [RFC6781] "DNSSEC Operational Practices, version
>    2" describes a procedure for transitioning a DNSSEC signed zone from
>    one (cooperative) operator to another.  The procedure works well in
>    many situations, but makes the assumption that it is feasible for the
>    two operators to simultaneously publish slightly different versions
>    of the zone being transferred.  In some cases, such as with TLD
>    registries, operational considerations require both operators to
>    publish identical versions of the zone for the duration of the
>    transition.  This document describes a modified transition procedure
>    which can be used in these cases.
>

2.4.  The Procedure
Second paragraph under "Signing Migration",
"ganinig" -> "gaining"

In "Post Migration"
"severs" is correct, but it looks so much like a common misspelling of
"server" that I would replace it with "stops" or "breaks".

-- 
Bob Harold
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