At Sun, 13 Dec 2015 22:08:13 -0500, Tim Wicinski <tjw.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
> This starts a Call for Adoption for draft-fanf-dnsop-rfc2317bis > > The draft is available here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fanf-dnsop-rfc2317bis/ > > Please review this draft to see if you think it is suitable for adoption > by DNSOP, and comments to the list, clearly stating your view. Since > it's updating a prior document, we should discuss whether it's a > significant update. > > Please also indicate if you are willing to contribute text, review, etc. > > Since this Call for Adoption is around the holiday season, I will run > this a bit longer. > > This call for adoption ends midnight 31 December 2015 UTC. It's already in 2016 but I don't think I've seen a conclusion announcement of the call, so: I support the adoption of this document. I'm also willing to review subsequent versions. Some initial, mostly minor comments on the current version:m - I wonder why its intended status is standards track. It generally just talks about operational techniques rather than describe some new protocol, so a BCP seems to be more appropriate (in fact RFC2317 is a BCP). Perhaps it's because this document will "update" RFC2136? I'm not necessarily opposed to it, but just curious. - Section 7.5: s/will be still be/will still be/ transaction (though this benefit should not be exaggerated: the records will be still be cached separately and will time out independently). Do however note that the resolver's traversal via - Section 8 Similarly, for its IPv6 network 2001:db8:A::/48, organization A again asks for a DNAME record, like this: I'm not sure why 'a' in '2001:db8:A::' is upper-cased, but if there's not a strong reason for it I'd consider lower-casing it, applying the recommendation of RFC5952 (whose primary target is not literature like I-Ds or RFCs, but I think it's generally better to have consistent view in various textual representations of IPv6 addresses). -- JINMEI, Tatuya _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop