Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-tcp-keepalive-05: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-tcp-keepalive/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- - 3.2.2: I think it would be helpful to give some more guidance about the “timeout” period. That is, when does it start, does it reset when a new query is sent, etc? This is somewhat implied by the term “idle”, but it would be better to be explicit. -3.3.2: I understand from later in the draft that the OPT RR in a query does not necessarily need to have include edns-tcp-keepalive for the server to include it in the response. A careless reader might easily miss that distinction. It would be helpful to emphasize it here. === Editorial=== - Abstract: The abstract is rather long. The first paragraph might be better left to the introduction section. - 1: The introduction sort of buries the lede. The idea that clients and servers need to manage idle connections is not mentioned until paragraphs 8 and 9. That's the whole point of the document. _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
