Hi Stephane, Sorry for slow response, I've been traveling on vacation.
On Sat, Oct 24, 2015 at 3:49 PM, Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzme...@nic.fr> wrote: > On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 05:33:49PM -0400, > Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> wrote > a message of 59 lines which said: > >> This revision incorporated editorial improvements and improvements in >> explanatory and motivational text based on comments on the WG mailing >> list. > > I've read it and diffed it and I believe it is OK. Section 5.2 is now, > IMO, much clearer and it addresses the problem reported in > <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/QrrLtnCXhVI8usZsvAd5PU_b1Y4>, > thanks. Thanks. > Editorial: "correct souce addresses" -> "correct source addresses", > "improves the probablity" -> "improves the probability". Also, "a > client MUST send client COOKIEs" is not a consistent casing of > cookie. It should be Client Cookies, to follow the convention of the > rest of the draft. Same thing for "a server MUST send server COOKIEs". OK. I could produce an updated draft with fixes for those typos to upload during IETF meeting week but I'm not sure if other changes are desired. Thanks, Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
